The Better Line is built on one simple idea: say what you mean — but better.
Hi, I’m Carol — the voice (and red pen) behind The Better Line. This isn’t about making you sound slick, generic, or like you just swallowed a LinkedIn thesaurus. It’s about helping your message feel sharp, clear, and unmistakably you.
Because words don’t just explain what you do — they carry your personality. And if your copy sounds like a stranger, you might as well be marketing for someone else. I help coaches, consultants and other solo smarts show up with words that actually feel like theirs — confident, clean, and ready to do the heavy lifting.
Still reading? That’s a good sign.
If your profile’s out of tune with how you actually show up — we can fix that.
I help you shape the message that’s in your head. It’s your voice — let’s make sure people hear it.
